Thank you SO MUCH for your detailed feedback and suggestions. I was worried because I didn’t totally know what a beta read was before this, but it was really exactly what I needed—almost like a class on writing. I had no clue how to plot out something completely character driven until I read over and over again what you said about goals. Having that focus makes the writing process less overwhelming. I think this whole experience will improve my writing tremendously.

Working with Rose was a blast! Her mastery really shone as she helped point out what was working with my story as well as what could be improved (with examples!). I’d absolutely recommend anyone to work with her.