Thank you SO MUCH for your detailed feedback and suggestions. I was worried because I didn’t totally know what a beta read was before this, but it was really exactly what I needed—almost like a class on writing. I had no clue how to plot out something completely character driven until I read over and over again what you said about goals. Having that focus makes the writing process less overwhelming. I think this whole experience will improve my writing tremendously.
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I discovered historical romance when I was twelve, and took my first stab at writing one a few years later. My prose has improved since then, but my fascination with all things Regency hasn’t changed. When I’m not writing and researching my own stories, or helping other authors write and research theirs over at Rose Does The Research, you can find me reading, watching, cooking, doodling, rambling, and daydreaming in Philadelphia. View all posts by Rose Lerner